Very nice! The only thing that stood out to me was the tangent made by his index finger and the stub of the sword, as well as the stub and the edge of the canvas; it's a really unfortunate line there that draws attention. He also seems to be holding the sword quite loosely for it being so massive, but that's details I suppose :>.
Very nicely rendered skin and cloth, well done!
The girl is so hot
I keep looking at her ass X3